Screenplay V.2.1
Below is the 2nd Version of the screenplay for the Story I have written with the working title, The Analog Kid. The Changes between version 1 and 2 are the following:
- The script has been restructured following review and asl peer feedback. The script was lacking in focus, and also didn't communicate themes well. The new script has been rewritten with these in mind.
- The Script now follows an industry standard layout. using correct terminology, layout and type font, to give a more professional look
- Some of the dialogue was re-written, as it was considered unnatural and cheesy. Dialogue is now less direct and more "human"
I am much happier with the new script, as it reads a lot better and looks more professional, thanks to my own critical analysis as well as peer feedback.
- The script has been restructured following review and asl peer feedback. The script was lacking in focus, and also didn't communicate themes well. The new script has been rewritten with these in mind.
- The Script now follows an industry standard layout. using correct terminology, layout and type font, to give a more professional look
- Some of the dialogue was re-written, as it was considered unnatural and cheesy. Dialogue is now less direct and more "human"
I am much happier with the new script, as it reads a lot better and looks more professional, thanks to my own critical analysis as well as peer feedback.
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